Destination Reached

Parts: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10


The mirror had to be destroyed, but not yet not while we are here.

“Agatha is everything ready?”

“Yes Mit.”

“And Ann?”

“She was taken care of her while you made the connection, she is with her partner now.”

“Great, now my favourite part..” “Mit!” Agatha interrupted.

“Are you sure it’s a smart thing to do? I know it’s game for you but one day it will bite you back in the ass.”

“I guess you are right, but we used them so much they deserve to know, they need to know what they did.” said Mithra.

Now ladies and gentlemen lets cut the crap and I will explain something, especially to my authors. Yes, you there reading it, I love breaking the ‘fourth wall’ especially when the bricks hit the audience. Confused? Let me explain. We used you, it’s what we like to do me and my sister. The dream you have read about, you all had it and don’t remember it. My sister has a special ability, she found you and visited your dreams for days, implanting ideas, giving instructions. The flames that consume her in the dream actually consume your memory of what happened.

We gathered the six of you randomly, yet you formed a strong group. You can’t remember yet but you all came together to Oslo, following the visions. You found the house and barged into it. I don’t own the house no, it belonged to Ann, her husband James and their daughter. The Man of the house naturally stood to defend his family from the 6 strangers so you killed him, then tortured and killed Ann. Funny enough the whole six of your brains refused to take in what you did to their 5-year-old daughter. What is funnier to me is that all of you thought you are writing fiction out of your own will, you couldn’t be more wrong. What you wrote was a statement of your actions that the police will be very interested in. I had to control your minds fooling you to think it is just another story you wrote.

It was not easy with the 6 of you, Lucas resisted the most that’s why there was so much craziness in his part, Amanda was close to figuring out how to starjump. Did any of you recently felt time missing? remorse, regret or sadness? maybe relief from letting the anger out? that would be your subconscious mind going over what you all did. Your group murdered an innocent family and tried to burn the house down, tried since Lloyd’s old Zippo wasn’t so trusty after all.

If you are wondering why I wouldn’t be the main suspect just think who is more likely responsible, a man who can’t be found and starjumps or a group of people who describe the crime scene and try to blame it on a fictional character? Both police and I know that adding more fiction won’t make it less real.

Don’t be angry or disappointed, if the mirror remains intact you can still figure it out.

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Author: Bartek D

Starting my first blog Penumbra. Read the introduction in the beginning to find out whats it all about and who am I.

50 thoughts on “Destination Reached”

    1. I don’t mind…. oh god I’m shock, laughing, I just love it …. hahahahahah
      I love that Newspaper thing…. great .. Im re blogging it
      From last few weeks I was so busy with my office work that i didn’t give time to read the blogs …… but today I read it … and I really like it 🙂

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      1. No problem, if you don’t mind I’ll do it in the morning, you can download it from the blog but probably won’t be the best resolution. Just tell me where to send it and I’ll do it when I wake up.


  1. I am definitely impressed by this unexpected fourth wall break. I’ve seen short stories that took a similar route but not something so long. I think it worked well.
    On a side note, you said you wanted to start another, why would it be different?

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    1. I just want the next one to be more defined, as in minimum number ow words, hopefully forcing people to google facts to move on and maybe some sort of wildcard system. Possibly I would have a solution to a mystery in my head from before we begin but it would be your job to uncover it. Something like that.

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      1. Nice idea.
        Another side note, how did you make the newspaper, Photoshop or from scratch? I read the whole thing and it’s mostly about moose population and says granny wins for no reason. If you wrote it all then I need an explanation.

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      1. I guess you could, but I don’t think it would lift off today, I’m still thinking of some way to make it better then the previous one, maybe you can help me to decide on the minimum word count. The start can be 100 no problem but the rest should be at least 600 or more what do you think? Plus I really want to make a post before the challenge before it leaves my head.

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      2. Great idea, it’s you made me excited so I’ll try to get to it ASAP. I will write a post for my girlfriend than I’ll sit down to the rules and story. It just my time today is messed up because. Most of the day I’m sleeping off the night shift and in the evening going to work again. 😊

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