The mirror had to be destroyed, but not yet not while we are here.
“Agatha is everything ready?”
“Yes Mit.”
“And Ann?”
“She was taken care of her while you made the connection, she is with her partner now.”
“Great, now my favourite part..” “Mit!” Agatha interrupted.
“Are you sure it’s a smart thing to do? I know it’s game for you but one day it will bite you back in the ass.”
“I guess you are right, but we used them so much they deserve to know, they need to know what they did.” said Mithra.
Now ladies and gentlemen lets cut the crap and I will explain something, especially to my authors. Yes, you there reading it, I love breaking the ‘fourth wall’ especially when the bricks hit the audience. Confused? Let me explain. We used you, it’s what we like to do me and my sister. The dream you have read about, you all had it and don’t remember it. My sister has a special ability, she found you and visited your dreams for days, implanting ideas, giving instructions. The flames that consume her in the dream actually consume your memory of what happened.
We gathered the six of you randomly, yet you formed a strong group. You can’t remember yet but you all came together to Oslo, following the visions. You found the house and barged into it. I don’t own the house no, it belonged to Ann, her husband James and their daughter. The Man of the house naturally stood to defend his family from the 6 strangers so you killed him, then tortured and killed Ann. Funny enough the whole six of your brains refused to take in what you did to their 5-year-old daughter. What is funnier to me is that all of you thought you are writing fiction out of your own will, you couldn’t be more wrong. What you wrote was a statement of your actions that the police will be very interested in. I had to control your minds fooling you to think it is just another story you wrote.
It was not easy with the 6 of you, Lucas resisted the most that’s why there was so much craziness in his part, Amanda was close to figuring out how to starjump. Did any of you recently felt time missing? remorse, regret or sadness? maybe relief from letting the anger out? that would be your subconscious mind going over what you all did. Your group murdered an innocent family and tried to burn the house down, tried since Lloyd’s old Zippo wasn’t so trusty after all.
If you are wondering why I wouldn’t be the main suspect just think who is more likely responsible, a man who can’t be found and starjumps or a group of people who describe the crime scene and try to blame it on a fictional character? Both police and I know that adding more fiction won’t make it less real.
Don’t be angry or disappointed, if the mirror remains intact you can still figure it out.
I hope I haven’t disappointed you with my ending and I apologize for using your photos without permission but this way I hoped to surprise you.
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I don’t mind…. oh god I’m shock, laughing, I just love it …. hahahahahah
I love that Newspaper thing…. great .. Im re blogging it
From last few weeks I was so busy with my office work that i didn’t give time to read the blogs …… but today I read it … and I really like it 🙂
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Thank you very much, I’m so happy that you liked it.
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🙂
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Omg how did you get that photo lmao. 😂 this is awesome! Love this newspaper thing. Great great ♥️
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Can you also send me a copy please? Here’s my email: applesrae@gmail.com
Now I think I have to make my facebook account on private lol jk
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Sure I will send it tomorrow, I’m glad you like it, it wasn’t hard to get the photos especially yours. I just got the faces I’m not keeping any photos😉
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No worries. You should have sent me a friend request! Lol. Thank youuu ♥️
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I think it was sent successfully. Let me know if you get it.
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Got it Bartek! Thank youuu!
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I suspected something was up when you followed my Facebook for Lloyd’s Lens Photography. Well played. Worth the surprise. 😀
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Thank you. There is a chance I could have done it better if I would write during the day and not at 2am. Glad you like it.
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I tend to be a night owl myself. This was a fun exercise and I have several ideas that was spawned from it. I have a request. Would you please send me a copy of the Newspaper image?
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No problem, if you don’t mind I’ll do it in the morning, you can download it from the blog but probably won’t be the best resolution. Just tell me where to send it and I’ll do it when I wake up.
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Thank you and no rush. Send it to lloydslensphotography@gmail.com when you are able. Rest well.
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Done.
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Thank you
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I am definitely impressed by this unexpected fourth wall break. I’ve seen short stories that took a similar route but not something so long. I think it worked well.
On a side note, you said you wanted to start another, why would it be different?
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I just want the next one to be more defined, as in minimum number ow words, hopefully forcing people to google facts to move on and maybe some sort of wildcard system. Possibly I would have a solution to a mystery in my head from before we begin but it would be your job to uncover it. Something like that.
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Nice idea.
Another side note, how did you make the newspaper, Photoshop or from scratch? I read the whole thing and it’s mostly about moose population and says granny wins for no reason. If you wrote it all then I need an explanation.
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Hah no, I used some online news generator, this one looked the best from the few I found I actually haven’t read the whole moose thing.
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Is it reblog that shares it? If it is can I? I’m also wanting to use the newspaper picture as featured image and Instagram, permission?
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Of course, you are part of do all you want with it.
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Thanks, I just thought it only right to ask first.
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No problem, are you hinting that I should have done the same haha
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Of course not, I just don’t know the rules of the internet yet (shares, reblogs and similar).
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I’ve reblogged it now and used the image for all my destination unknown parts. I’ve been changing my homepage layout recently from text based to picture based, could I ask your opinion?
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That’s cool, on the phone it looks pretty much the same I’ll let you know when I’m on my computer.
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Thanks, its sometimes hard to get opinions on basic things like that, let me know if there’s anything I can do to help you in return.
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It’s the first bit above the photos. The rest of it is another story.
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Do you mean the news story, I know. I was curious what the rest said, someone who’d do a fourth wall break might go as far as writing something secret as part of another story.
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Yes, I was talking about the newspaper.
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Loved the ending! I can prove I wasn t in Oslo though I was having a MRI scan today…unless I was star jumping! PS where did you get my photo here or faceboook? Just curious.
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I got it from your blog. I’m happy you like it.
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hey Bartek I’ve hundred word story……. do we start from that its kinda sci fic…
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I don’t know yet but I’m curious what you have, o was thinking about something that will be just on the blurry line of reality and Sci fi.
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you can twist it.. what say ?
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Sure, where you think of starting today?
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I had already write it
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Should I post it on my account
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I guess you could, but I don’t think it would lift off today, I’m still thinking of some way to make it better then the previous one, maybe you can help me to decide on the minimum word count. The start can be 100 no problem but the rest should be at least 600 or more what do you think? Plus I really want to make a post before the challenge before it leaves my head.
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Ohk sure ….. give me your mail id …… lemme send you my short story afterward you decide … and I will be free after 2 hours from now
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Great idea, it’s dworczykbartek@gmail.com you made me excited so I’ll try to get to it ASAP. I will write a post for my girlfriend than I’ll sit down to the rules and story. It just my time today is messed up because. Most of the day I’m sleeping off the night shift and in the evening going to work again. 😊
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I m a night bird but always prefer to be at home instead of going for work……. love to work for myself (in night) 🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Yeah night are better, so I have the post i wanted up, unfortunately I’ll get to the challenge probably tomorrow, have you sent the story yet?
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Doing that …. internet speed is slow ….. gimme a minute
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Got it, like it and replied 😉
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Ohh wait lemme check ☺️☺️☺️
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