The Lost Soul….Part 2

Part 2 is finally here, Part 1 is here.


It was my sweet sixteen birthday and my parents were giving me the one gift every teenager wanted, to be treated like an adult. They were letting me throw my own party with the house to myself! They had rules like “no boys”, which would be broken. No alcohol, no loud music and we had to stay out of the game closet for some reason. Ever since I turned thirteen I had been prohibited from going into the game closet, it was also the age I was given my fashion bracelet that I always had to wear. I noticed most teenagers had one so I didn’t feel special but they all didn’t look the same, so some of us felt unique. My parents said they were to help keep kids out of trouble, who was I to argue? My dad figured some of the rules would be broken so he…

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Author: Bartek D

Starting my first blog Penumbra. Read the introduction in the beginning to find out whats it all about and who am I.

9 thoughts on “The Lost Soul….Part 2”

  1. I just love this part this is going great now and happy too …… when no response come to the first part I was like ‘oh no’ …. but now when I read it my oh no mood change to yeaaaahhh

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  2. Hi Bartek I’m so sorry for being off WP for nearly a month lol i just maximised the time i could spend with family since i dont really get to be with them all the time being miles away lol anyhow, let me know when I can jump in, i can probably do right after the one you’re saying that’s new to fiction? Just let me know 🙂

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    1. Nice to see you are back, you don’t need to apologize to me. I hope you had great holiday with your family. That guy bit off more than he could chew that’s why I added you in IG to ask if you want the next part but then decided I’ll write insted of him. So yes it would be great if you could to the next one, I will post part 3 soon.

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